That's awesome Imani! I really like how you have used plenty of information about down at the river and the museum. When you talk about breaking your foot it doesn't really make sense so maybe say what you said but in a different way. On slide no.4 add 'This is' before 'a picture' and 'a picture' doesn't need capital letters and neither does 'finishing'. Great job! :-)
That's awesome Imani! I really like how you have used plenty of information about down at the river and the museum. When you talk about breaking your foot it doesn't really make sense so maybe say what you said but in a different way. On slide no.4 add 'This is' before 'a picture' and 'a picture' doesn't need capital letters and neither does 'finishing'. Great job! :-)
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